The previous editor return was so clean I couldn’t believe it. Well, party is over. Chapter 9 back and while there isn’t that much red on it, there is one glaring hole in the story that she pointed out. Once again, I have to be sure to put on paper what the reader needs to understand what is going on. Because I get it does NOT count. And so, work to get done. Off I go. Hoping everyone finds good reading material.
