Only four more chapters to review, revise, edit. You’d think that would be done quickly. But, I’ve been working on chapter 41 for almost two weeks. Every time I read through it, more things popped up that had to be changed, things that were missing, things that were wrong, characters who left the scene and then mysteriously showed up again, sections that really needed more explanation for readers to be involved in what was happening. I think when I originally wrote this I must have been in a hurry to get to the conclusion. It’s just sloppy writing and something that I cannot let go to publishing. So, finally, I think I’ve fixed chapter 41 and can move on. I only hope the last four chapters are in better shape.
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