Fantasy Update 3
Today I went to the end of the novel because I realized there were some issues that readers were not going to accept. Timing for one, needed some work. It was too rushed despite being at the end, there are things that just take time to tell and shouldn’t be short changed. Also, one character that seemed important early in the story just sort of disappears. If she was so important, especially to one of the main characters, how can that happen? True, she did not turn out to be the main character’s love of his life, but still, even friends aren’t just forgotten. Anyway, did a lot of work there and it is better. Not finished, but better.